The chapters haven't been rewritten despite the plot being full of holes, mc being a complete idiot because of someone is the opposite gender, very inconsistent mc. Overall this is rated way too high, a three star at most due to it being written well with no or not many grammatical errors. It might be better in later chapters but that doesn't matter if you can't stomach the earlier ones which are painful to read.
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with those thoughts i started to walk towards the main door...hoping someone would hear me out for the last time. Because i was feeling numb, i am unable to feel anything not even the cold feeling i was feeling before.My head started to become heavy and i started to lost my voice.
（−＿−;） Loke sighed and Durai and Karlo went down and they were shocked to see the man in cloak at their couch sitting then they went down Karlo clenched his fist and was ready to punch Loke but he was stopped because Durai calmed and sat the opposite couch "D-dinner!" Leyla's voice resounded at the kitchen Jurai casually stood up " have some dinner here" Loke just nodded and followed and the other two then they all sat at the table and ate quietly Leyla was also shaking seeing the person who commands is them casually eating and still on his black cloak "What's with this atmosphere? its awkward" finally they heard the god in a normal voice " How can we not be quiet a god of death is here" Loke just shrugged like he heard nothing "Dont worry Im here to warn you not ask you to kill someone" all of them just nodded and eat queietly "Humans Kill here in a quiet way Ill give you proper powers to hide your presence while I look for the traitor at heaven" Loke suddenly blurted "They took fruits from my realm and let it drink or eat to sick people those fruits represents a person's life and if they had that they wont die easily except if I can deal it personally or find someone that has my power "Loke confessed Karlo snapped the thin spoon "So you just dragged us to to your negilligence ! I killed Mimi because of that" Karlo said Loke stayed silent "Mimi your sister is scheduled to die at 1 year old but she ate a fruit your Mother hid " he said "In her next life she will be a cat want to get her?" Karlo's expression soften "Give it to me" Karlo said Loke then went outside and took a box and sounds of Moews were echoing in the room "Eat first and ill tell you what are the cats for
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