A great fanfic. It's very hard to find good fanfic and good writing style. But, author is one of the rare kind. He is already jonin level writer. Hopefully we will see a lot of chapters on this story.
Very interesting work so far. I believe that if the author keeps the updates as promised, this work will be very successful. However, I hope the author doesn't put common things like harem or romance (despite being with the target) , seeing the abundance in other works, making it a bit cloying to read.
Good so far.Mc had second chance so he back in timeline before apo.And of course it will strong and cunning mc.I just hope you can add some romance, but not too much.
Story had a lot of promise and i enjoyed reading it. Unfortunately it looks like the author has dropped it. There have been no updates here or on his patreon for a while now.
Read up to chapter 50, doing a review now because not sure if I'm going to continue or not. The first 10 chapters I thought were doing well was kind of unique and interesting. But after the Mc ended up in the progenitor body story up to this point has just been kinda boring. Mc is very impulsive and niave but with his age and inexperienced it's a classic trope when novels start with a young normal Mc. Think the main reason I'm not really into the story has to do with the focus now being on setting up the introduction to the characters of the story and a bit of plot development but so far there hasn't been any real moments with the characters that's made me interested or care about them. Guess it's kinda my fault I did come into this expecting more of a b*d*ss Mc due to seeing him being a vampire progenitor in the description. Also not sure if something like Google translate is being used to translate the story or just simple mistakes but there is issues with the writing with he and she being mixed up often and other details. If the novel does end up to your liking one thing is commendable to point out is the author is releasing chapters at a rate you don't see with many novels so you'll have something to read each day.
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