I feel like so far (as of Chapter 90) the pacing is both too fast and too slow. It seems like the MC has barely done anything but also rushes to whatever happens next. Theres barely any down time for the MC to actually train since it seems like every 3 days he is forced to move to a different location. It's definitely a good read but the pacing just keeps throwing me off, especially with chapters that make it seem like there was some sort of progression between the chapters which can make it confusing at times.
I am currently in Book 5 chapter 69 and throughout the whole novel the MC is a dim-bulb m*r*n who is manipulated and used by others. He gets manipulated very easily and doesn't spend a single minute thinking through his actions. Does he remain the same through out the whole novel? If so then f*ck this sh*t man.
We went from time loop to going inside a video game and coming out to defeat light yagami then going back to time loop and celebrating a marriage.This was really good
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