My Neighbor is a Werewolf!

I like it so far and just hope to see more chapters. when you build it into a bigger story I'll have a more comprehensive review

The Writing Quality is 5 Stars based off the average webnovel, with the Stability of Updates being very good at time of review.Im mentioning this all before because what im going to say is me hating on the story a bit.I dont think the concept was as well executed as it could be, or maybe its just my own interpretation of what I read.The story starts off great, but there seems to be so much filler it dulls the mind, and one of the MC's being this litteral god of weaponry who can create new techniques within a week, makes you want to see the other MC's (Rean's) specialty.And by 64 hes a fuckin blacksmith, now dont get me wrong, I love blacksmithing novels, but to be fair Ive only ever found two. Blacksmithing can be made cool, but it seems that by the time of mid-story, the author just didnt care about making Rean anything special.I mean he has the light element, while Roan has the dark element. There twins, when I read these details I was thinking," Oh thats so badass, theyre gonna have this connection of hate-portrayal (from what I could see by there personalities twoards another) where they actually enjoy eachothers company, but theyll never say that.Rean will be a master healer who benefits the tribe by supporting and giving ideas, while Roan is this master of combat who knows all weapons "Sure thats a bit dramaticized, but Roan does end up being like that, he is a badass kid who knows how to beat people above his realm of cultivation, he knows every weapon in the universe, he makes techniques when hes bored and cultivates hard.What does rean do? Makes fuckin low-quality steel and sells it off, then the next chapter we see Roan hinting to him to try and learn how to use the light element sense he collects it faster than Roan so he should master something of his own instead of relying on Roan, the **** does he do, he makes a god damn light saber.I dont think Rean is especially stupid, I just believe the author is making him retarded.Sorry for the bad grammar and the swear at the end, but this is just so sad to see such a great concept unexplored.

Nicely done...Keep up the good work.i see good potential in this story though too much cliche to someone become rich like that .It seems like a fantasy .

So far, your story seems really good. I truly appreciate your hard work. It was meant to be a slice-of-life and romance show, and here I was, hoping for a fight scene—silly me. But then you gave me some hope by showing a glimpse of werewolf and human strength. Now I want to know the mystery behind those four (...spoiler...) things that everyone is after. So, don’t give up! How will sarah defeat them ?

In the shape of an "L" on her forehead

It was a sunny day yet a bit too hot for a normal sunny day.

Just then, Jacob broke through the crowd and appeared in front of us. Shortly after, Sean and Connor appeared as well. Sean and Connor were the other two guys in my circle of friends, and they were pretty much inseparable. They had every class together, had lunch together, and actually lived pretty close to each other as well.

By the passing of time, she started to hear laughter while at the same time there was crying on the background. She looked around to find where it was coming from. But because of the vastness of these woods and the giant trees that block her view, she cannot find anyone. Until then, she noticed something in the big tree not far from here. It looks hideous, rotten trunk and barks, and there are less leaves on its branches.