its my first time review story and english is not my first languange.its story about immortal human that caught the eye of yandere goddess. its have potential to be great. but the mc is i dont know how to say it perfect ? bland? idealistic? good guy?.they trust each other so fast and it make the story bland. i expect at least the mc suspicious for the heroine and make misunderstanding action that make mc more suspicious with heroine and make the heroine love the mc more. or trying to break the marriage by many ways.like poor heroine with dominering ceo,general,etc novel but with gender reversal. maybe something like that to make the story better
average bait, bad quality beyond the trial read, would not recommend.translation is obviously based on MTL then edited to look like a real translation. do not waste your money in the chapters.
This review has been automatically generated by the Godfather World System as a way to increase the ratings of this novel. Although not much could be said of the novel for now, it has been approved by the system as being an S-grade novel.
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