Can anyone recomend me this type of novel? Kingdom build with/out system with Male MC ofc. kindly tell me, thank you! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~===============================~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I would so love to rate this story as a 5, however there are some key issues that ruin this story for me.The first major problem in this story is the writing quality. Now I'm not 100% sure, but I'm assuming the author English is a secondary language. The constant and blatant grammatical errors ruin 99% of the immersion of the story for me.The updating doesn't seem to be very stable.The story development seems to be fairly well done, it does need some work though.The character design seems to be fleshed out nicely. The author makes a strong effort to give his mc a strong background story that gives justice to things hes done/is doing.The world background also gets explained fairly well. Though there haven't been many chapters, so far this part seems done as well as can be.Honestly my biggest complaint comes from the writing quality. If the author could fix this, I believe he would have a solid story.
loved the story too bad it has only 300 something chapters originally, this is just a cash grab at this point! 500 chapters is insane to stretch this story out just go to fan mŧļ to read it properly
"I already know your plan, but I wanted to test you more, good perception and battle experience, and good cooperation but always remember to know your enemy first. Thats why you lose. but, I didnt kill you. a Courageous and become a future true Hero who was still an Egg, so relax for now. Boy, dont change. that Conviction of yours is one of the characteristics of true Hero! just like All Might." Stain look at Neji and Koichi The Crawler who was at the top of the Building while walking to darkness without any sound and vanished without trace
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