the story is complete hot trash you make it go to fast your grammar is trash but you can get better i know you might not like how i'm saying this but how you made it was trash but if you start taking it slow let us see how he grew how they'r relation ships moved it would be way better than those anti hero storys
man just dont copy try 2 add ur own **** *tell me if i am right , it has versatile mage , that gene one.. , then that goldfinger one.. one piece.. etc. *as im not regular reader, though i think i got some of those mashup novel right.. but still a good way to remember those novel... *hope u dont stop it...
Really an amazing story. Its what you expect of a reencarnation/videogame novel but it has its unique strong points. For starters, his actions do not change the history of the game(yet, they probably will), but it is the AI he programmed that fills the gaps and makes the world different from ehat he programmed. Characters so far are solid and the world, as far as we've seen, is well thought and built. MC is real funny sometimes, which affs to his charm. Author is not a native english speaker, so he sometimes makes grammar or spelling mistakes, but it is nothing too obvious and I dare say his writing quality and syntax is better than most english speakers. As for updates stability, he is commited and usually updates once a day, but he sometimes takes breaks that are a bit too long. Anyway, overall I would give a 4.5, but since I like this story so much I decided on five. Really a good read. Highly recommended.
"Listen here you overgrown brat..." started the boy. "When I said, 'tell me why you're here'...I expected you to tell me who sent you try and kill me and why, not a lesson in the origin of soul halves and this world first true era..." Said the boy with grey hair as calmly as he could while ticks began appearing on the forehead of his most stoic of faces.
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