Mute Girl The Series : Rose Thorns

You'll never know if you don't go

wanted to write a comment for why you stopped the divine hunter buh I've used up my reply slot. That book is great pls continue the hardwork🖤🖤

ummm...I think you need to put the quotation marks at the dialogue to make it become clearer, and also...try to make the story a show rather then a tell, if you can... but overall, it's the writing the problem, if you managed to correct it, then it will be improved.