Multiverse: Deathstroke

I really loved the world building part and how the characters are introduced. Very engaging in terms of how the plot moves ahead. I am really enjoying this read. Best wishes to the author and keep going on your writing path!

There were numerous punctuation mistakes which made it hard to understand and decreased the speed of reading the text. But, the concept was quite interesting. I also like the cover.

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"Are you younger than Lily? You sound a little immature, you're cute though."

"Our company has had a couple of close calls. Imperials nearly spotted us"

I hung up the phone and tossed it on my couch.

The grammar is impeccable and the story line is enthralling. This is the first time I'm reading this sort of scifi novel and it's been really good. Continue updating please.

Fun book to read … 👍🏻 … I don’t have to say more … read it and you’ll have fun …

Fast paced and right into the action. I like how MC gets to be powerful without any unnecessary debuffs. Looking forward to how the story of Riley unfolds in this XianXia world.