MC is the personification of cringe. He White Knights every woman he has a conversation with, and can basically solve every world crisis instantly, but takes his time just f*ck*ng around while he gives everyone the benefit of the doubt and allows innocent people to die until he can have a DBZ-style battle and fix things in one fell swoop. Every lame trope is present in MC's harem. Every other male in the story is either trying to give their daughter to the MC, are against the MC, or are so far down on whichever ladder of comparison is present that they're either browbeaten into submission or maintain an entirely neutral stance. He's 100% an alpha dude bro, but thinks he's a Japanese Beta. Neither of those things are positive, and the weird mishmash that forms his broken personality comes across as a constantly bored sociopath in search of amusement without any semblance of a real human being.
I'm loving this book, the plot and characters are fantastic and leave me eagerly awaiting updates! Looking forward to seeing how the story unfolds. Keep up the great work ...
its obvious Mirabel couldnt date John anymore even if I was in her position I wouldn't, I love how it ended, it should be Raymond not John anymore. Mirabel warned John alot of times, he is a man he should know his actions are going to hurt her.
Popular Reviews
Betrayal from family definitely hurts the most