Mr. CEO, Please Marry My Mommy

Review Shark does not find it worth your time, would rather read machine translated of other novels nothing to sustain my attention ....454565

Writing Quality: No major mistakes.Story development: This is quite a bit difficult to say. Although there are quite a good amount of chapters, but I still can't say for sure about it. But nonetheless, I hope MC can atleast be strong if not OP. I really am concerned about his Battle power.Character Design: This is quite a good point to notice. There are different types of people with different personalities. Updating Stability: Can't say for sure.World Background: The World have a lot of possibilities and potential. If developed smartly, this Novel can become a good EXTRA one.Hope Author continues to write this novel. I really am interested in this novel. There is a lot of potential in this novel. Also please don't lock the chapters anytime soon. I will be really disappointed.Atleast try to make the chapters free till 50 or so chapters.

The story has a very interesting and lovable start. I commend the writer for a great job done. Give it a read! I am positive that you will love it.

"So this is okay to you…."

"Anna? Kenneth?" I sat up and looked around. Kenneth was sleeping on the floor while Anna slept on the bed across the room. I went to Kenneth and tried to pick him up. Surprisingly he was light as a feather. I placed him on the bed I slept in and sat at the foot of the bed. My mind swarmed in thoughts. I miss Alice. I miss mom. I didn't want to continue dragging Anna and Kenneth into my circle of misfortune. So I decided...

The next day, Shi Won went to the Hunter association to trade the items he received in the dungeon then asked for the association to put up the holy staff and holy robe for auction. After gaining the associations approval, Shi Won gave them the items for inspection before they put it into their auction 2 weeks later

I'm not quite sure how to respond.

I felt ready, and against entry in his back, feeling only as a step would, first with the tip and the rest, which would eventually end, by filling it with more pleasure.

Frisk on the other hand was rather conflicted. They didn't want to destroy Chara, it would be even worse that they found out they could be alive once more, only to loose their life again and be stuck in Frisk's head. Though if there was some form of glitch that was created in this timeline, then would it carry over? Their eyes wandered to Gaster whom was moving along side them. Nodding at them as if they knew what they were thinking.

I pretty cool book to put ur time into...Am not usually into this kinds of books but who's counting no one so I love it and I hope you could too

the Mc is so stupid it's not even funny.. 12 chapters in and he's still stupid.. and the smartest thing he did is wish for wisdom..knowledge and comprehensiveness.. but he's still stupid.. like how can you have all that and be so specially stupid.. even while free I can't read this.. such a shame

The story so far has a potential to be a good one, just a few improvements and regular updates and you have a fan.👍🏿