Mr. Billionaire Bound By My Baby Bump

185 chapters 2-11-23

good story plot

Reading chapter 14. Story is getting interesting BUT It’s difficult to read with all the grammatical errors n bad sentence structure… this story needs to be proofread.

I was a newbie back then. This was what I read almost a year ago. Then saw this and thought well how bad has this gotten?

Yes please, when does that disappear. The whole awakening stuff overall has been annoying at best but this rabbit hat villain is a drop reason.

Naw i didn't mean er gen novel i meant everybody loves large chests  that novel is so goofy

Never read a novel as good as this new readers don't mind the comments this novel was mahd from beginning to the end the mc loyalty is something we can all learn from man was loyal and got his priorities right no unnecessary problems and always stay focused
According to the second uncle he says this guy can practice like mad

This is such a great novel. I loved reading this again and again. ♡⁠(⁠>⁠ ⁠ਊ⁠ ⁠<⁠)⁠♡

it’s not a bad novel, but the plot holes get bigger and bigger as the story progresses. The author seems to constantly forget his own explained powers and treasures all the time. Not to mention ridiculous oversights like the entire human population starving while being surrounded by sea life. He constantly forgets that there are spacial storage items and teleport formations around and often goes through “oh no, we can’t possibly ship all this food safely!” Or “oh, this army is trapped here and I can only travel in and out with about 50 people!” When a few dozen chapters prior he did things like store tens of thousands of people in his sleeves and a couple hundred chapters prior it was explained that there were many storage items that could hold an army for traveling through a portal around. Also the amount of times that ridiculous plot devices are used to prolong an enemy’s life by saving them over and over again, and the sheer ludicrously dumb decisions that the higher up people make about not removing an enemy when they have a chance to and instead leaving them in a place where they can steal most of the treasures of the world while massively improving their forces and wiping out humanity is just stupid.

As someone rereading for the 3rd or so time since it was dropped, I really wish they would pick it back up

good and its completed