this story....i don't know about other things but the human aspect and all the conversations are so natural. sometimes the mc is meh(like he used "urgh" 3 times back 3 back) but all the other bg characters are well thought and have a human like personality. for example mike and saya, they are literally like some people i know. and rosie and her seducing is so natural and doesn't feel forced at all. author u have a good Brain just improve in the mc to make the story perfect . lastly i am not a fan of the game(convanant or whatever the name is) if it was real....i would never play lol. i bet it will flop in real life😤
overall, I have greatly enjoyed the first 100 chapters. New experience seeing the MC deal with his heart demons. most novels mcs don't even have this issues. I feel I've over invested into a story I will be dropping due to coin costs for novels these days. if you can afford to, give this book a chance. 103 free chapters to try and draw you in!!
Throughly enjoyed it. Its op protag with creation powers that has really good world building. Author did a really good job with overall concept and probably better than legendary mechanic. The grammar is decent but the updates are sporadic so I guess just binge it once in a while
I love the whole idea of this story and the world-building. I can't wait for more! I love the use of they in the first chapter. I also feel the 2020 simulation feels a bit like last year. It was all so strange. Like nothing was real.
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