not bad good writing, it's just weirdly heavy with all the secondary knowledge, I find myself just skipping the unending descriptions on things and especially the politics and schemes, they just kinda happen by front loading copious amounts of exposition and expecting people to follow along with the convoluted nonsense, also I think you went to big to quickly introducing universe level concepts before he barely steps out of his first sect is a good way to burn yourself out and the readers, overall meh I read it a little at a time when other novels are updating
Aaa, this story is so great I don't even know where to start. The whole thing is sweet and touching and packed full of lively, vibrant characters and intertwined stories. Once I started reading I ended up skipping the ongoing stories I read just so I could binge on this one. A fantastic piece of art!
Probably one of my favorites on here, but in later chapters it gets extremely drawn out. Like 6 chapters of doing the business back to back to back then followed by a chapter or 2 of story movement followed by individual dates for another several chapters. I need storyline movement to keep me interested.
The party started earlier. All of them members celebrated to the form of their own group. The leader is Camila because she's wise and she's brave. She goes to the Infront of the stage and she wanted to say something to all of the current member.
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