The beginning of the story is very promising it is like an inevitable invitation to keep reading, which I did. You can describe more the characters and the places so it will make it easier for the reader to picture them. A few grammatical errors. Nevertheless, the story promises to be awesome
Ms. Author, the ending is not what I anticipated. The ending could have been better if they finally defeated the enemy and returned home to reunite with their family. Though disappointed with the ending but it was a good story which was full of drama.
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