Mind Linker

Infinite in mystery is the gift of the GoddessWe seek it thus, and take to the skyRipples form on the water's surfaceThe wandering soul knows no rest.

The concept is Interesting, but doesn't write the story for you. This will be a lot of work beyond controlling various diseases. Unless you can characterize the diseases so they become an integral part of the story.Also, this concept has 50% more potential if you can make diseases from the symbiotic bacteria that support and help the larger lifeform they inhabit, and turn them into your Support Pet that gives permanent buffs.The concept has another degree of potential if you can make layered disease arrays. The idea is to have your probiotic buff colony help control your disease attack colony, taking a lot of the pressure off of you to directly control each instance of your Diseases. With these formations and systems of Diseases, you can recruit and reward allies in addition to tearing down individuals. And it makes surgical strikes possible, rather than just being a Plague Bearer Demon Lord.

surely worth the read. Please take your time, especially with this huge change in story direction.!$)!$)!$)!$!)$!)$!)$!)!$)!$)!$)!$)!$#)!$)!$)!$)!$$)!$)!$)!$)!$)!$)!$)!$)!$)!$)!$!)$!)$!)$!)!$)!$)!$)!$)!$#)!$)!$)!$)!$$)!$)!$)!$)!$)!$)!$)

If someone needs to read 100 chapters to START enjoying your story thats a bad sign.                                                      

If this novel has reached volume 2. I will create new novel, which can belong to category side story, same parallel world, or same author. LOLNeed your power stone to make this novel more quickly release.Title New Novel Taijutsu Master Shuichi.

Since it's only one chapter so I cannot say much but as I read your story, the characters seems likeable and the storyline looks interesting and it was a nice reading with minor grammar mistakes, as I've seen so far. Keep up the good work, author :)

The Synopsis is BAD. It made me NOT want to read it for a very long time!!! It made it sound like a comedy. It's not a comedy! It made it sound like the MC only had a magically OPed Minibus. NOPE! The Mini bus is powerful and able to be modified even more to become better. The Mini bus starts out on par with the power of the Zombies.  Also, the MC and other people in the world can get more powerful. There is also a type of level attached to the different people and creatures in the world too :)

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