Seriously how is this ranked so high? I mean I know my comment will be erased like all my previous comments on other novels but still.How is the MC even betrayed? The dude literally walked up and stabbed the guy in the chest like some cheater who paid off his opponent if anything I was happy that he was tricked as the guy is literally retarded and then he died? What?? What is this Sword Art online 2.0? The plot literally jumps from him dying to all of the sudden waking up in the past and he accepts it within seconds/minutes of waking up no problem. It then jumps to him solving all his family problems and ends up in game where it is suppose to be the first day of the game going live. Instead I don't know what the author was smoking but it feels like the game has been live for years as all of a sudden "elites" and guilds are popping out of nowhere with no real explanation on their backgrounds other than the characters being flat with no real character other than antagonizing the MC.Don't even get me started on the ridiculous 57000 exp required to level up to like 80% of level 2. I literally felt my balls hurt and want to smash my sexy laptop after reading this crap. 12 chapters in and I feel like this story is one of the worst pieces of crap I have ever seen. There are tons of stories better than this pile of crap ranked a lot lower and somehow this is near the top? Please if you are going to treat your readers as retards as least make it slightly believable Qidian.
I remember a book that was in trial read. The mc cultivated and slapped faces of young masters, he met his lover then had kids and built a family. But then he got injured, so he used most of his family’s resources to heal himself. But then that didn’t work and he died. The system then activated...
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Now I was confused. What was actually magic? Was it the ability to do impossible things? Does that mean that magic itself is a source of impossibility? Could a poison bite and a healing spell really both be magic? If that's the case, then could breathing also be considered magic? If I almost died because of breathing, would I gain a breathing ability? Actually, maybe that was taking it too far. How would a breathing ability work? I guess it could be useful for people who can't use their lungs. Or maybe if you're missing both lungs, you could use magic to breathe.
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