It is pretty good. the grammar is still readable. The MC is pretty normal not stupid and not smart. and this one is harem with Bro con. anyway its pretty good read
i must say i fell in love with this story immediately and will always support the authors decision in this story as he has done an superb job already making readers want more as each chapter catches my interest and leaves open ones imagination for theories of future events (btw i call everyone he at times even if they of other gender even if i shouldn't as its my minds first reaction as of what to say)
I’ve only read to chapter 15ish but I like the story already....every chapter I read, the pace and excitement in the story picks up.So this guy is forced to be ‘friends’ with some mean people and one day storms off and went missing blah blah blah then his parents send him and 7 other kids to this one dreamworld (a video game like place where people who where special headbands when they sleep can go) where he gets a special pet and starts his journey as a traveller (pets or comrades do all the work for you) he faces a few minor challenges then these random green armoured dudes show up searching for the 8 of them for some reason and they manage to temporarily escape by a hair......idk wuts next but it’s better than I can explain it.
First impression review!FL is very mature for her age (as expected in the synopsis.) She's very aware of her surroundings and isn't one to pounce or act without careful thought.To see her figure out she transmigrated to the book was anti-climactic not just because a lot of books have this plot but also because she was perceptive enough about it, pushing aside questions she might have like how it happened in exchange for survival—especially when she her new character got poisoned. What's the use of lashing out when it could cause you your life? She also transmigrated to a timeline before the beginning of the novel she read so not everything is figured out for her. I expect to see her try to make it with blind eyes. Then, see how she'd do when she enters the main timeline of the story.Kudos to Sorahana, of course, my writing deity. I could only hope to be as good as you are. Hoping to be able to be here for this novel every step of the way. 💛
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