this is amazing, I can't wait for the next chapters, I got completely sucked into it and placed myself in the shoes of the MC and I could just see everything that happened before me and it's amazing
A funny use of the norse mythology and the others with a fast pacing rather nice if compared with many other novels way too slow in a rather complicated world where gods, magic and cultivation are mixedThough you really need an editor to correct the mistakes because sometimes it can be hard to understand what you mean, I also saw that you repeated some sentences twice on some chapters. So an editor could help you correct what maybe you won't see when doing it yourself (don't forget that your readers will be happy to help you if you need us for that).And also it's only my opinion but 6 and 10 years old is kind of too young for what happens to them even if they are more mature or grown up.Keep going and good luck Mr/Ms Author 😁
Great novel! I am really enjoying it so far. I personally am a fan of OP MC’s and this is great. I hope the translator can continue posting this story.
Alfred was smiling at his attempts to try and hurt him until he realized his ankle where he was kicked was throbbing. How could such a young elf at the age of around 13 injure someone like him at the level of 39.
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