Masa Muda Bersanaanya

Good book..I am stucked

chapter 1, and I'm like ouuuu

This story is very well written. Although the plot is similar to other books in some places, I still like how it has its own quality. I have been searching for something to read for a few days now, and this book was like drinking a cold glass of water on a hot day. This story absolutely quenched my thirst for a story.

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heyo crazy cronie here,review on 21/03/2021 @chap230 (released chap till date: 340)review divided in: Short reviewLong review IMORatingsConclusionWarning (includes spoilers) short review: An original plot with a bad Harem story. Okayish world building with almost zero tension.long review: pros: 1) A complete original concept! Atleast to me this was the first time I ever read something like this. Well there are novels which have similar basics but this story is different from those things. 2) The world building is okayish. The power levels are clearly explained for each and every world. Different world, different power systems, different stage names. And with the plot that author is trying to make I know this ain't gonna be easy. But author could have worked more, but then again this novel is just around 20% completed I guess so we can expect more. *SPOILER (not really)*[The same thing, aiming for immortality, though not mentioned yet, but yeah that is where the novel is heading.... But then again almost all the novels have similar goals]3) I am a harem supporter so yeah that's a plus from me. (Though I hate to say it, without harem this novel would have been much better. Contradictory? Can't help it...) 4) The story is surprisingly addicting. You might start to get bored but you can't leave this novel midpoint and would want to read more and more... cons:1) Almost zero character depth. Almost all the girls fall in love with MC at first sight. Well at first sight might be a little much but yeah it doesn't even take few chaps for them to fall for MC. And surprisingly no girls are against it. 2) This is a light hearted novel. There is almost no tension. At least I never felt any tension. You know everything is gonna be ok at the end. 3) You can't feel much emotions from the side characters or Harem. Except for blush of girls and sometimes little sadness if girls when mc leaves them. This is 1st POV so yeah don't expect other people views.4) all girls are super beauties, this is a harem so you can expect it... But why all the girls blush everytime MC make some move against them. Not any bold girls out there? Would love to have more types of girls. 5) Harem: yeah i came mainly for Harem so i added it as cons but this novel would have been better without Harem, atleast that is what I felt...6) [Not really a CONS] Plot armor, this novel is full of plot armor but again that doesn't really matter since almost all novels have plot armors. But there are really many things done for plot convenience.IMO:- A little more romance would have been better... Well I came here after reading your stealing spree... So yeah author- you can guess why I wanted more Romance. - And hey just my opinion but why don't you add someone's opinion in some bonus chaps, like others pov as a side chap, I think readers might love it. Well just my opinion so yeah you can ignore it... RATINGS: writing: 7.5/10  update: 9/10 plot: 8/10characters: 7.5/10pacing: 7.5/10dialogues: 7/10entertainment: 7/10OVERALL: 3.8/5Conclusion:This is a good time pass. If you can bear starting 20 or so chapters where I found MC a little annoying then yeah this is a good read. A 4 from me instead of 3.5 in the rating since i am biased xD.WARNING:  *SPOILER (not exactly)*- MC is somewhere between hero and anti hero, consciously or subconsciously & due to various circumstances mostly leaning towards hero... Sometimes he is cold and badass tho, an inconsistent personality which I actually like it.... GIF: Chandler from Friends because he is the best

No hate to you dear translator but this would be the first novel where i see an immortal emperor afraid of nuclear weapons. An immortal emperor is way above galaxy power scale and here the fairy's expression turns solemn. Even a nascent soul can decimate these weapons . And does she not have a space ring to store her treasures so that she can recover. Ah so frustrating

This is my review of the first fifty chapters:1.The novel begins with auxiliary chapters and I recommend reading it before starting to read the novel.2.The construction of the novel is more than wonderful, with simple errors from the author that you will not notice much ... The main character starts pathetic and I can say that if he does not have the plot armour, he will not live more than 20 chapters.3.It is easy to notice the naivety of the main character in all the events of the first fifty chapters of the novel from following the evil maid who destroyed his village or following her orders even if he had a chance to escape ... not accepting the fact that his father abandoned him to save his life and the life of his mother, or that his maid is just a spy  To a hostile kingdom ... or when he decided to submit to the family of the assassins who originally caused all his suffering and the fact that he apologized for causing the murder of the female assassin who kidnapped him almost made me decide to leave the novel.4.Even now I can ignore all the mistakes that he did because of his ignorance or his weakness ... But when he was forced to become an assassin from the same hostile kingdom that destroyed his village and is the main cause of all his suffering and all he did is train and train and train only because he was ordered to do, This became extremely absurd.5.Here what bothers me is the way he treats the people who trained him ... First they are enemies so he is not supposed to befriend them, But if we ignore this point, we can talk about his treatment of his trainer (the only person who cared about him), Although she did not want to treat him harshly or train him intensely because she could not bear to see a child suffering like this, he was treating her coldly and without an appreciation for her concern, Even when he decided to try to stop her from risking her life to save him from execution, all that came in his mind was insulting her and hurting her feelings so that she would stop caring for him.6.One of the things that surprised me was the fact that he never used his mind even once during the first fifty chapters.7.Just so as not to misunderstand me ... the author wrote a wonderful novel and the main character's flaws are intended to illustrate his future growth and the difference between his way of thinking before and after the turning point.8. The main character's turning point or what I hope would be his turning point is Chapter 50 in which he realizes how narrow-minded an idiot he was in making his decisions, I know very well that there is more than one point that should be much better to count as his turning point in the first fifty chapters, but this is what happened so bear with his naivety until then.9.Mr.author made a good novel so everyone who reads this review just has a try. Read it and you will love what you find.10.My advice to the author: Try to change the name of the novel because the current name is not attractive at all.Again thanks for your hard work Mr.author, you did a great job.

Female sword = it look a god.