Cerita yang sangat menarik dan pekerjaan MC juga sangat menarik tapi ending ceritanya terlalu cepat seperti di paksakan untuk tamat padahal cerita sebelumnya masih sangat menarik.
Chapters are in badly need of proof readingHow webnovel novels have degenerated.................awdqwqrhirheifshfsdifbsifhsofoiw;egfio;wheoifio;ahef;ioahef
Overall, quite good; Pacing is great, and explanations of concepts doesn't seem overloaded. More characters would be nice, though, and maybe more fight scenes (if that's what you would like to go for). Also, really solid update schedule!Keep up the good work.
You have got a kind of imagination that I can ever not imagine. it is good.' to my thinking, you should work on your cover nothing else. I have started reading the novel by its synopsis will go ahead.
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Hey, got to say that this is a good novel. However, I noticed that there are some inconsistency. For example, the MC contradicting himself (chapter 24). Another example, MC's first meeting with the novel's original MC. The interaction ended awkwardly and were a bit abrupt with the MC's response. Other than a few bits and nitpicking those, the overall story is interesting and have a sense of story flow. Also, a last bit of advice to improve the story is by making a story map. The story map doesn't need to be fully or well made, the story map must be able to guide the story direction. That's it for this review.
Let me preface this by saying, thank you for reading ACE. I'll be frank, I'm not doing this because of my passion for ACE or even webnovels in general, I was handed this book and I'd figured why not. It's a good way to earn some cash while studying. Sci-fi is not even my reading preference but I've grown to enjoy ACE. However, there are times that I've thought of dropping this because of the reader response. Yes, crazy fake science abound in ACE and I know this isn't a good defense but the author isn't a scientist and has stated beforehand that his focus isn't on the scientific accuracy but plot. The fact that my knowledge of science only reaches secondary level probably doesn't help either. I tried researching whenever possible and I apologize for all the mistakes that I've done cause god knows there are plenty of those. Maybe, as one reader pointed out, ACE does deserve a better translator. Regardless, I'm not one to abandon ship halfway. For better or for worse, I'll see ACE to its bitter end and if that offends anyone, I apologize for my inability to do ACE justice.
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