Man from the machine

I love the way the chapters are organized Nice writing style and story ideaThis novel has great potentialsWorth the read!Thumbs up to the author for a job well done

This is a weird split with martial art and video games. The reason it is weird is that this is mainly a martial arts book with the mc telling of his video game experience (I exaggerate, but it is how it feels). This is very unusual because usually novels will make it the other way around. Don't be fooled by the description, this is not a video game focused book with a martial arts background, martial arts is the focus.As for the book out of the game, it is fairly descent. A bit lacking in describing stages of cultivation, but is more or less fine. The is some evil underground threat looming over that is not really expanded on. The thing I find weird is there seem to only be genius cultivators from the young people and no one older has special talents or abilities and are only strong due to time, but the out of game story is not half bad.As for the video game portion, I will start by saying I usually like video game light novels, but this one seems plain sloppy. Very little detain is given about the game mechanics and the insanely high numbers with no context annoys me. It usually is along the line of: the mc just took 738,000 damage at level 30 and he is fine even though at level 1 he had 1000 hp. There is nothing concrete about the game, except the skills which have a description but have a relatively long cool down (say 20 second) but he uses every attack. I don't know about you, but even I can run 10 meters and attack 3 times in 20 seconds (I would not likely hit but I could do it), but he uses this skill to attack an opponent attacks 3 times, killing the opponent and uses the same skill again immediately after. It really makes the mc feel underwhelming when you think, even a lazy unathletic person like me could do that... What is so special about that.

Please don't drop. It will be a long time until I can find another book that is as easy and fun to read. Don't drop. It a really great story.

The writing does a good job of setting the atmosphere and tension but is let down by grammar.Pacing is pretty good, the story moves along well. Each individual chapter also doesn't feel too long.

"Sheela, I think we should take them back. If they continue to stay here it will only get more dangerous for the kids."

"That was an easy enemy. I can't believe it only took a pop of a canister to defeat this little guy."

"There's no different for you to be asking for it when the clue lead towards you!" sneered the man.

Me:ok