once I started reading this book I couldn't stop , this book is bringing all of my favorite horror based movies and putting them in a novel in the form of a game , if I was in this novel to experience this it would be lovely
Great novel, love the way Mc character is basically living the world in 2D and also living in 3D at the same time, love to see this kind of difference between other novels first time I've seen one. Writing quality is great better then your average joe. I would recommend this novel to people who like to see a progressiveness of the MC as he lives his life in both 2D & 3D.
Wonderful story. I have read and got hooked from the beginning. So many things are unfolding as we read forward becoming more interesting. Update more chapters soon. we are waiting
Read about 40 chapters and had to stop reading (for now) . Very interesting world and the story seems to also become more interesting . So why did I stop? Well unless you like to read how pretty much every side characters (I guess at least once every chapter) are stunned and/or amazed by how the MC is a guy instead of a girl, how he has such soft skin, and how it makes women envious and men jealous, then this will get on your nerves.The characters designs are often also a bit boring. Instead of describing a character based on unique features (like a crooked nose), you get to hear why someone is beautiful or average. In other words telling instead of showing.It is also hard to gauge the intelligence of this MC. Sometimes he sounds smart, like using a rock throwing game in his favour. Other times he sounds like a idiot, like when he dismisses a skill allowing him to shoot through walls without considering any other uses for it like being able to penetrate armor or shields.If you can read past those kind of descriptions every chapter then I would definitely recommend this. The game is fun, the world is great, and the class is one I donโt think is used often. Props to the author for writing an interesting novel, I just need a break from all the trap and beauty descriptions.
Hi there! Thank you for even making it this far! This is my attempt at a holistic breakdown of this work, but please keep in mind that it is my first time writing a story of this genre. TLDR: Not a typical OP ML who levels up in a game. More of the journey (both mental and in-game) of a top eSports player. Inspired by actual eSports players and discusses their struggles, games, and career. Writing Quality: Clear and understandable writing with minimal grammatical errors. Generally reread and edited at least twice before publishing. I personally pride myself on vivid descriptions of scenery and emotion and try to add small Easter eggs or foreshadowing, but it might read a bit wordier than most works of this genre.Stability of Updates: Pushing for an update at least once every two days. I am a current student, so please excuse me if I disappear for a few days. That being said, if you vote and comment, chances of me updating or even giving a mass release are very high :3Story Development: Will be a moderately paced story, roughly divided into four quarters that mirror the ML's place in life: 1. Casual Play 2. Rise of eSports 3. Height of eSports Career 4. Forced towards Retirement/New Commercialization Trends *A lot of the plot drivers will be personal growth, both career-wise and interpersonal relationship-wise, so do not head into this story expecting a straight leveling up story.*Character Design: Very realistic character designs, with each person complete with their own strengths and flaws. More importantly, there will be character growth and development. World Background: Realistic setting that mirrors the history of eSports. The game, Kings of Valor, is loosely based on popular MOBAs such as League of Legends, except with different names, champions, and champion skills. (And yes I play League a lot ;-; Tbh wayyy more than I should for my own good)Warnings: Not the typical videogame story that focused on the game itself or the somehow OP ML but instead centers around character development, gamers' relationships to family and friends, societal expectations, and choosing between dreams and reality. Disclaimer: All coincidences with real life names and events are not intentional and are not intended to offend anyone.Enjoy! To see if people actually read through these reviews...if you play League, attach a GIF of your main! Also, if you wanna support me through Ko-Fi for the new Diana Ultimate skin, I swear I'll update ;-;
I can relate to the protagonist's life ๐ I want to live like her though it's not easy to accept the fact that all you have is a lie ๐ Good work, Ms. Author! You got me hooked and although I haven't finish reading all the chapters, I just want to share my thoughts ๐ Looking forward to finish reading the book ๐
First off, I read a story about a Panda; a frog; a dog, and even a Lilypad. Also a tree. Here's one about a Bamboo. How could I ever. Anyways, I love the story and all the others you create; but this one specifically is so engaging. It screams you 100%. Keep it up and keep making us smile. I could get lost in this book.
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