ok i know im not the sharpest toll in the shed but when did the nun meet up with mc it went from her drowning in a cave then she was on the boat did i miss something
Well, i dont know what to say, the positive thing is the translation is quite good, but the story is bleh, i dont read fully just skimming but the story is cliche with arogance young master then protagonist power up ypthen bla.. bla...bla (you know), why cant pick interesting story like -i forgot the title- mc is transmigration devil who make movie? (In trial read, but dont pick up). Is editor in webnovel or whoever choosing the novel cant pick one story that interesting instead of repeating novel with same story but different title ( sorry for bad english),.
Pretty amazing book great characters funny stories lots of adventure and many class designs it's an utterly amazing litrpg mu only complaint is the crazy amount of sex scenes in the first 20 or so chaps afterwards it even outs to a reasonable number
Fun and he doesn’t keep a low profile which is the source of much annoyance in other novels.. also his system is heaven defying but he doesn’t immediately recieve the highest level spirit root but has to work at it.. the translation is good if a bit stunted at times but there are no obvious mistakes.. more please
Honestly, the MC is an absolute retard and most of the story has me cringing. If you aren't into shame play and embarrassment, you might not be able to read it, because it's the story's main charm. TBH it was very, very hard to get this far so I can't say this story is for the faint of heart. I have read much worse, though, so there is that. MUCH WORSE.Hard to say this without spoilers but I really suspected some darker themes since that was how the narrative was progressing, but it has been a relief so far since I'm not into things that rhyme with vape and plackmail.
Short review: Very fun setup with good characters and an interesting system.Long review: The writing is overall decent, but the author shifts around in tense too much to make it a natural read. The story development is excellent, with a good introduction and setting up the stakes from the very first chapter. The characters are very well developed, with distinct features, and their interaction feels natural. I'm not far enough to say a lot about the world-building, but it appears solid, and I'm interested in how the author is going to make the supernatural features fit into an Earth-like world.
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