Jane cautiously approached the mysterious building, her fists clenched in determination despite her initial fear. Her curiosity, stronger than her apprehension, compelled her to sneak a peek inside the forbidden place. She glanced over her shoulder, relieved to see no sign of anyone who might have noticed her departure, as the alarms remained silent. Breathing heavily, she reached for the doorknob, but just as she touched it, a strong grip pulled her back, sending her stumbling. She looked up to find Allen, a stern look etched on his face, standing before her, much like a predator stalking its prey. Jane felt terror well up within her. "Explain yourself," Allen demanded, his voice still cold and unyielding. "Didn't I make it clear you weren't to come near this building?" "I...I was just curious," Jane stammered, her back pressed against the wall, trapping her in Allen's unwelcoming presence. "That's all." Allen smirked, an ominous glint in his eyes. "Curiosity can be deadly, you know. Prepare yourself for a night of consequences." The tension in the air was palpable, leaving Jane with a sinking feeling that her adventure had far from ended.
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But the further i went, the more i began to love the story. The MC was finally show to not be a complete morron and that he actually has morals.
Everything is perfect, the only thing that put a damper on it is the last chapters. It is obvious that the writer didn't have the will to keep writing more, so he rushed everything... and by rushed i mean along the lines of something similar to "he went to that place, conquer it, big secret enemy who has been slowly being show through the story reveals to be x, bad thigns happen, then went and defeated his archenemy, his other enemy decide to be his follower, no hope, power of bonds, they defeated the main villian, they went home, they married, everyone moves on in the world, end." in four chapters. Which hurts because everything in the story seemed to move so perfectly and flawlessly. It has so many arcs, and suddenly so much stuff is forced in just so few chapters.
Either way, hats down to the writer. Amazing story.
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