Lumina Church

The writing quality is okay but I’m dropping it. I got to around chapter 30 and the every freaking character s-s-stutters and it’s freaking annoying me. People can be surprised or scared or have pretty much any negative emotion without stuttering. It’s okay if one of the characters has a habit of stuttering, it can even be an obvious sign of character development when he develops more confidence but the excessive amount of stuttering by multiple characters, both the typically confident and unconfident, up to this point is a huge turn off.

this Book is amazing 👏 I like everything on it. The writing is clear and Understandable.It gives many emotions at the same time I really enjoy reading it ☺.Hoping we are going more stories😊Good continuation 😉👍

epic. i laughed, i cried, i couldn't put it down. there is a depth here that a lot of newer chinese webnovels don't have. a must-read for anyone interested in the genre.

Please update new chapters. I beg you!I don't mind even if I pay tickets....I won't reduce a star in my review due to updating stability. So please....(A member of the still waiting group.)

Very interesting story that took me to worlds, places and situations I could never have imagined. Dave has to deal with Goddesses (Destiny and Transmigration), with "Random World Transmigration Act" (which I won't begin to explain), a fairy, and most importantly, Lavendar. One of my favorite lines is, "This place defies the law of... well I think it defies all of them." That is what this tale does, it defies the usual and predictable, which is one of its best features.

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I really enjoyed reading this novel I recommend others to check it out                                                                       

I've really liked reading this story so far. the premise of returner is combined with system, and the trope of everyone has a system. I'm worried the author wont be able to make the characters actions effect the larger world, because he is a 1000 year old near immortal ranked cultivator who's gone back in time.