Love Can Devastate

A carriage moved slowly through the winding path as it seemed to travel forward. To most, it would look like a normal carriage. That's because it was completely normal. It was wooden, seemed a bit run down, full of hay, and had two elderly men riding on it.  Nothing out of the ordinary.

Now as she is standing outside the airport in New York, she has practically no idea as to what to do. She was tempted to go back. She remembered the teary goodbye she had with Aditi and her promised her to contact her everyday and give her updates as to what is going on. She missed her already.

...You punk, you will NOT be missed at all, now SCRAM!!!

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin

love the story and the mc background and how it has a game system that will help him get stronger.

Wow This is a fun read ngl. Didn't know you could write a cultivation novel. I hope you make him stay true to his shamelessness, I mean Monk in wuxia are usually most shameless of all lol they be like: "Amitabha benefactor, that treasure is fated with this penniless monk, hope magnanimous benefactor can part with it" 😂😂😂

it's a great story with brilliant story design. The thing i liked most is author 's writing style. no extra long, poetic  ai generated description. but still detailed enough to immerse readers in story. author doesn't need ai to increase word count or describe things he knows his story well and also knows how to present it in best and simple manner

WRITING QUALITY: 5/5The grammar is really good. The way that this was written was so easy to understand. No unnecessary expositions. Straight to the point just like how I like it. STABILITY OF UPDATES: 4/5It's still too early to judge but I am giving 4/5 because I checked the table of contents and found that the first chap was uploaded a month ago while there are only 13 chaps. I'm not complaining because at the end of the day, I'd still prefer to read the book that updates only once a week but well-written than the other way around. (But I still prefer a well-written daily update.)STORY DEVELOPMENT: 5/5No need to say anything. Read the first chapter and you'll know. CHARACTER DESIGN: 5/5They have their own accent, baby! Need I say more? The interactions between characters are believable. Not cardboard cut outs.WORLD BACKGROUND: 5/5I can visualize the place as I read. And there are no unnecessary expositions. PS. It was good but I just wished the paragraphs were a tad shorter though you can ignore this one. I just prefer shorter paragraphs. That's why.