Lord of War: Pandæmonium

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

Its only the second light novel i've ever read. However if this kind of level is standard, then I have the feeling that light novel are gonna become part of my life.

10 minutes later we broke apart I was gasping for air she smirked And started to  licking her lips before responding back

" it is me, Agna, we can have our conversation now "(Agna)

However in response to his actions, the voice kept calling him "Daya, Daya, Daya" it was getting louder, he turned and saw that the silhouette was running towards him, at an alamning pace "SH*T, SH*T,SH*T" he took out a whip from his shoulder sack, and began lashing at the ground, startling the sheeps and making them go faster. The time he encountered the ghosts, he had stopped seeing them as soon as he reached the end of the meadow. He was almost running with his sheep, and was missing just a few more lers(meters), to reach the end of the meadow. Behind him, he could hear the voice getting closer "DAYA, FURA, DAYA" the words sounded somehow familiar but he was not going to stop, until he was out of the meadow, and kept urging the sheep to advance.

Pero yung lalong nakakapagpabigat ng loob ko? Hindi ko man lang nasabi sa kanya yung nasa loob ko. Hindi ko man naparating yung gusto kong sabihin.

He fell with a sickening crunch and groan. I don't think hands are supposed to bend that way.

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

Only shooting stars break the moldSomebody once told me the world is gonna roll me

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