Concept of story is very good.But, the author don't know how to create scenario in the story. Most of the story was cliche and vey boring. The day after he gets system he becomes extremely arrogant that he puts no one in the eye. What can he do if someone hurts his family and starts to slow down his business. For finding 7th rank pet they lost another 7th rank pet, and they still obediently listened to MC and gone to go deep in the fracture space to search. Are they dumb or what. What if peak 9th Rank pet comes this time.
One of the best sport novels but it needs more time for the story to get to its best part (3th year middle school and high school). Hope to continue the good work.
Did mc forgot that he has a mother who ??? It is said in the very first chapter that he did'nt return home so that he could'nt be the burden to his mother but i have read till chapter 400,he still has'nt returned to his mother..
Woah, the story's so good. It's the first time I read something like this. A program that became human. Very interesting. The characters' personalities are funny and cute at the same time. Good work! 🥰
skip chapter 163 it's a repost of the first chapter. Quality translation, long chapters, lots of legalese, overall a good story so far.A bit slow on the romance front and the lead male borders on scummy but the author manages to make it funny instead of off putting
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