Plot seems interesting but translation looks like MTL, nearly unreadable translation quality. Would love to go back and reread this in the future if it gets a better translation.
Kindly find a good editor.. let me edit it for you. The English is worst than basic. Basic mean atleast you know how to connect the words to form understandable sentence while yours are totally broken.
The heck tong wei the mc's supposed to be girlfriend just suddenly disappeared and didn't even tell why in the story so what shes gone just like that? But hell su xiaoxue much better
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