"Legado de Vínculos: El Renacer de un Entrenador"

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I already love the plot, I hope it gets picked and or voted for. ................................ ......

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Oh god. This novel is freaking awesome.The chapters are nicely named, the prologue, even though it was an info-dump, was written so well that it didn't feel like that at all.The writing quality is superb, and I loved how everything created a sense of tension, from the first chapter.The only things I'd suggest to change are the words "A few years from now". Usually, these words aren't used for describing something that is already happening (in the story timeline, the future is the present), so perhaps change it to something like "In the year 20XX". Just a suggestion, though.Otherwise, great work!

Hm~ a fan-fic. I liked the synopsis and the cover. I hope the book is as good as that.                                                                  

I lost interest in the story the moment he told his aunt about the secret chat group he joined. I’m pretty lot of people don’t like stuff like this so I’m just warning you. From another review I’ve seen it also seems like the aunt herself is keeping secrets from the MC which is kind of ironic when the MC told her a huge secret which ended up benefiting her hugely.

  He drags himself out of bed at the first tap. Though she is surprised, Yua doesn't say anything about it. She heads to the fridge and pulls out his breakfast, lunch and dinner for the day while Taitsuke gets himself ready. The two walk hastily to the west forest having not said a word to each other.

Unfazed by the face of the mermaid, some mortals were already eating its cooked remains in front of the bonfire. Eating as if it was like any other food that humans gobbled up.