I'm not used to writing reviews, but I'm going to do it here because I really like this story. First of all, the author is experienced, he has already written something good and it shows, the descriptions are well done and the characters have well defined personalities. Then, the world is interesting, a large number of classes seem to be predicted and we can expect great battles against powerful monsters or nasty players.Finally, the update rate, at the beginning I had some reservations, but the author promised to publish more chapter.In short, it is a good novel, I advise you.
Update chapter 341.Guess that's it for me, huh. The latest chapters kind of got out of hand, plenty of plotholes. The pace is all over the place. Why would they fight for hundreds of years then go all-out and do so much in just 2 months. The power ups are also too quick with no rhyme or reason, jumping a whole rank because author hasn't prepared corresponding arc and there was a gap. Also don't like how MC behaves lately, he was doing better in early chapters, it seems so rushed up now and he's just going all solo guerilla. Corpse tide of Zenjue took several years of buildup to settle which was fine, but how about now?The novel felt like a mix of Demon's Diary, Protect Our Patriarch and some other. On one hand they're on islands, away from mainland, and warring another second-rate sect. On the other hand their little realm is merging with some demon world and there are space tunnels. A quite interesting mix to be honest, but the execution seems rather poor to me after the first 200,300 chapters: from management, planning, convos and buildups it became more of a fighting cultivation novel where MC constantly goes and fights powerhouses. This is boring.
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One normally could not use spirit medicine that was two ranks higher than one's cultivation because there was too much spirit energy in the medicine if one took it carelessly one would die by consuming it by blasting oneself.
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