Kujohito

"Are you happy now that you've gotten what you wanted?" Raven asked after he had pulled away slightly.

Jack: "AHAHAHA!, Ark!- (CHOMP!)

He locked it and burned away the wooden key with his soul fire.

• Queens: worth 9 Pawns. Queens possess all the characteristics of Rooks, Knights, and Bishops, making them the most balanced piece as well as the most powerful. Within individual peerages, Queens typically act as their master's second-in-command, overseeing the rest of the peerage. (Himejima Akeno)

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

a very good fanfiction, I highly recommend it, a good idea, I hope to continue reading chapters............................ ...............👏👏👏

I like how it starts, and the way it unfolds so far is really good. I hope it continues at this pace. I'm excited to see Kodach's growth.

Beautiful, actually better written than many successful authors I've read from. While Jerald may have had a hand in that, it doesn't discredit the amazing work you've put in. There are literally only 2 things I would change, letting us know who's POV we switched with a sub-header, and letting us know when timeskips happens, other than than, perfect

More than 140 words, good novel so far, keep it up 👍 it's funny to read the names from the discord server lol. I gotta fill 140 words I'm also surprised I'm the only one to post anything yet or rate it. Can't wait for next chapter

I just finished reading your book, and I have to say, it’s absolutely fantastic! I truly enjoyed it. I’d love to offer a few tips that might help boost the performance and visibility of your book even more. I believe these could take your work to the next level