King Cobra

Aside from the obvious problems being the grammar( which at the my current chapter 221, has gotten much better then the beginning) this novel is actually really good and fun to read honestly author has mentioned repeatedly that hes not a native English speaker and also cant hire an editor so I can't be too harsh considering the story is really good and intriguingmc is good, a little weird in the beginning but once things gets rolling he becomes much better.some of the FL so far are a bit generic innocent lovey bombshells (diya,jasmine, natasha) although diya's character is becoming more interesting recently with her plot developmentsthe backstory with xiao feng and mc and the past forgotten by mc is also pretty interesting All in all if you can look past the grammar and whatnot this is really a hidden gem that has potential enough to trump some of the "top rated" swill on this app Great Work keep it up !!

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So whenever he sleeps, he becomes Cthulu? That means that this is half a monster protag novel. Although the mc isn’t really a monster, I’m satisfied with what I have now.

I'm sorry to give such a low rating but the author doesn't know what to write.I don't mean grammar, I'm not English and I can understand history very well.He writes without thinking about future or previous chapters, he focuses only on the current story arc.Take for example when the Lin family is kidnapped: The parents are weak and the protagonist has to bow, huh no, plot twist, they are actually much stronger than they show! This is revealed in the future, but then why did the father allow his family to be kidnapped?But it doesn't matter, it's a bad thing but it didn't bring this to the drop, but the exact same thing happens shortly after (shortly after the parents reveal their power), even worse than in the beginning.The protagonist does nothing when his mother and sister are taken away in front of him, despite the fact that the enemy has said he wants them both, making it clear what he wants the two women ...I continued reading to find out the motivation, which marked the drop of the series:"Oh no, because if you intervene, your father will have a block, it doesn't matter if your sister and your mother are violated." (The phrase is not quite like that, but the gist is this. We know that nothing will happen, since the author is not faithful to what he writes and invents things to create plot twists that break the plot).This is why I dropped, but there are a lot of smaller errors, which don't make the story understand.Like the conflict of the two souls within the protagonist, which was not transmitted at all. Conflict? Nothing ever happened between the two souls, it's just a stretch for the growth of the protagonist.The relationships of the characters that come out of nowhere.The fact that the protagonist loves animals (even when he was on earth, written as someone who defended and saved animals), and then makes them die only because they can be brought to life.In short, there are many errors of writing (not English).Besides this is an unoriginal story, I have never read astral pet shop or what it's called, so I don't judge the beginning. I just say that he does not quote but copies many things, such as the character of Momonga (not a quote), the tribulations of the sky / lightning, the examination of the tamers which is identical to two other stories (theory to a very famous one, and practical punching beasts to improve their strength, which you should have already read in another fairly famous story).In short, I do not recommend the story.The rating is not a precise star, a little more (1,8), since it has some nice chapters, but it is not enough for the two stars. I struggled to read up to chapter 300+, as I didn't want to drop until I figured things out, but that chapter is pretty awful.

Looking forward to the next happenings of this story i  find it quiet nice and interesting so i will try to read more of this ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Just the title alone is interesting and I'm expecting lots of incredible moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell future readers not to miss this one.

The door opened and spilled in a blinding light from the hallway. Sara squinted as she adjusted to the sudden intrusion to her darkened room, and the first thing that she registered, was the color red.

The one who spoke was a lady. She was in her mid 20's. she had a very sexy figure. And also a mature one. Her face was very  beautiful but there was a natural frost on her face.