in this story, ALL women have problems with smell !! in every chapter and with any movement of the body, mouth, wind, thoughts, "mysterious" aromas are carried ...
What is up with this?! Everytime I start reading something with an 8yr old, there's some creepy weird sexual or romantic tension with an older woman...this is super awkward and gross...the MC is 8!!! even if he is much older at heart, his physical body is still 8!!!! yuck!!!
the grammar doesn't bother me, its more of the redundant word usage, I understand what the writer trying to do. overall, its very promising, stopped at 50, going to let it build some more before continuing to readauthor, if one thing I can point out, you mentioned HP and the fights seem smooth, but its hard to grasp the idea of one hit kill, when damage is suppose to be fixated, or does it only apply when they are in the dungeon maybe make a side chapter covering this information, like key notes or somethingthanks
I like the novel very much, waiting for more and hoping you don't drop it.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This is my first time reading a science fiction story and my impression of this book is. .. .IMPRESSIVE!! I love the author when he told us the details of his fantasy world and the way he does the storytelling too. Keep up the good job. .. .cheers! !!
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