Keeper of Tartarus

It is a book with an interesting narrative. Although there are three or five small details that disrupt the flow, they are not that disturbing. It's just that the time jumps are not a good alternative way of moving from scene to scene. I would have preferred a little description of the journey.I wish you success! Write lots of chapters, okay?

I like it, great idea and concept, lemons are good too. Recommended