Really good novel, but author please increase the update chapter. even though this novel per chapter words is bigger then most of the top novels, but one chapter a day and sometime no chapter (i know you have issues since i see your comments) really is a demerit to this novel. It really is such a great harem novel and kind of like the best harem novel with the most chadest mc i have ever read. I am personally only like the action (including training part with scarlett sisters) aspect of the story (whether it is the wives who are fighting or mc) but with wives and lovers such as Victoria (really feels like an extra to complete familydon), (Lacus and Siena; i really do not understand why these two got added in the harem but i get pepper ), Demon generals who ended up getting alucard name but we saw no ritual or even a hint of snu snu with them. I hope you keep on continue the novel for two years at least. i felt like you were rushing the entire Greek war (which i thought would be a really major arc with hundred plus chap but it got concluded in like fifteen chap?) Samar arc felt like it went on for a while but at least it gave us the background for entire Samar so i was ok with it.I see Victor became so strong after Greek war and his dragon evolution that i feel all primordial gods just got trivialize, as i remember the war, no primordial god used their true form as they didnt want to destroy the pantheon so that went on Victor's favor as well but i don't even know if the true form of these gods is really that big of an massive upgrade to the power as its not stated anywhere in the novel about their multipliers like how it was done so for the Vampires.Even though the introduction of Emperors and Overlords seems to open the novel to Universal and multi-versal level, but the terminology of Sectors (Low, mid, high), Galaxies, Universes, Cosmos need to be explore further as right now the true extent of power is still in the air and we just don't have a lot of basis to gauge Victor's power anymore. I just feel all the known strongest gods and primordial gods, Victor can fight them all without any issues. I have saw your comments of who could face against Victor would be Odin, Ra, Amaterasu (and her two brothers who were said to be average gods in chapter 0 but now due to Amaterasu feeling a second gen primordial, i assume they are also primordial gods?) and God-king of Elder gods but i just feel like they really wont stand much of a fight (i would love to be wrong as i like fights where mc would need to go absolutely all out to win).Another note on harem, as much as i love big harems but can you please make mc like say no have boundaries and standards to his harem, i really don't like that anyone with a slightest aspect of 'obsession' and 'yandere' aspect will end up in the harem while his other harems like Mizuki, Victoria, the three scarlett sisters, Demon generals gets no good development or personal time with victor at all. I miss the chapters where Victor use to take girls to dates with there one on one time which really does wonder in long terms.Goddesses such as like Lilith, hestia, persephone (may be?), Nyx, gaia,(you hinted Tiamat as well), Dun Scaith (now?), Hera and Rhea (may be?) I have no idea how will u be managing this but i trust you, as i have trusted you to not ruin your novel with the pacing all this time. There is now the Blood god religion as well which has its own fair share of yanderes who totally fits Victors lover criteria. I just dont know if any of them will be his wives or not as its all the air which i really don't like. In the discord, i see that everyone just accepts that all the females who gets named and have even the slightest interest in Victor will be in his harem which just destroys the charm of the novel that was built for like 690+ chapters. Please don't ruin it just for some readers ask that you add this girl or that girl in the harem.I have heard from some people that there will be like 6 more volumes after this and i am very much looking forward to it, so please do your best in each volumes and don't rush story. I would love to see more detailed explanation of Victor's powers and skill sets, its been missing since his blood dragon transformation.Also on another note Please like give a good explanation of Power levels as the one given in chapter 0 is really lackluster for the hype fights this novel had.I hope u read this comment and have a nice day.
Cardboard world and characters. Lots of inconsistencies and omissions. Everything seems to play along with the main character. The protagonist is not distinguished by intelligence and ingenuity, his victory in battle is known from the very beginning. The plot is short and very straightforward.
around 50 chapter in and not much sign of harem (2 potential were even deflected). this is really good and but it look like it lack popularity. the synopsis honestly sound generic although i admit that i can't think any better. the conflict is well thought out without using those brain dead cliches villain (no father, grandfather, elder, and ancestors coming to get you). there is no system, power mostly come from pure godlike talent and hardwork.
I normally don't drop novels this fast, but I got too pissed off. I don't know about everyone else, but personally I started this novel partially because I saw that the MC was raised as a killer after being kidnapped by a dark organisation. I normally gravitate to these stories because it means the MC is ruthless and broken which makes for interesting reading (not raised to be assassin, but Supreme Magus is a great example of broken character). But then there is a timeskip and they are now teenagers. These two prodigies, who have grown up competing and sharpening each other every day get bullied by their slightly older sister who we have never had any indication is strong. Very annoying, but I accepted it and chalked it up to a staple of the genre, despite how infuriating it is. But then he gets attacked by a girl, randomly and with no provocation. So what happens. Does this MC who was raised as a weapon until the age of 9 fight back? Does the MC, who had to survive by fighting both male and female kids his own age to survive retaliate? No, he fucking doesn't. He takes it. Then she attacks him again. Is he finally provoked, and pushed to reveal a little of his killer instinct? Hell no. He doesn't like hitting women. Then when she attacks him again and pushes him to fight, and he wins, does he show any kind of ruthlessness? No he politely says goodbye, and says she can find him any time. This, in simple terms is a complete betrayal of who he is as a character, and it's a complete betrayal of the readers who have invested in the character. So dropped.
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Even though I am a woman, I am so obsessed with this story. It has been attractive since the beginning. The storyline is mostly comedy, but at the time he battles, this funny kid can turn out to be serious immediately. Therefore, I kind of like the character's dimension because it is clear and easy to understand. The character is not so crazy in power that it makes me stressed.
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