I loved the concept of this novel the system is amazing and the first fifty chapters or so were so good but unfortunately after that it devolved into nothing but nationalism and face slapping that you normally see in modern day Chinese novels, I kept reading for another hundred chapters or so hoping that it would get back on track but no luck. I sincerely hope that someone makes another novel with a similar system and that it doesn’t devolve into pointless nonsense.
So far a pretty good story about a world where Music is the only way to harness magic power and fight the evils that prey on humanity. In the first 20 chapters it manages to make you laugh and hit you in the feels. The musical descriptions are also really well done. If you're interested at the idea of Musician mages at all I recommend giving it a read.
The story development is not bad same with the Charakters but the grammar is hard to read with the story switching from „me perspective „ to 3rd person . As well as sentences that repeat themself .You can give this one a try but if you can’t handle the grammar then you should just drop it .
Adam enjoyed the food and then went to sleep. As the irresistible slumber started to take hold of his body, he remembered a small detail. The bird was still outside!
Dude you really need to read what you write, even the wishes name are wrong it's the "library of heaven path" not sky whatever you wrote 😂 as for the last wish he can already see the flaws of everything maybe he could have said to see every flaw without the person or object or whatever having to move since that's. Was the limitation of the original, something els you need to know there is nothing that is called "crop" that you keep on using and everything you wrot is simply not understood because you are not using commas and so on and no distinction between people it's exactly like a wall of text.
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