The novel is great. Unfortunately it has been on Hiatus for past 1 month. Writer took a leave for a day and has been missing since. I wish Webnovel would stop recommending novels that are on hiatus or abandoned. Even for trial reads.
Doesn't have a good beginning and I almost gave up on it but it gets better around chapter 50. The action is good and the development is story make me look forward to what will happen next. What I dont like though is he is always saving his sister. I hope she too become strong in the future. I also hope updating speed picks up....
Needs edited by a human again. Too many wrong pronouns which at some points were 2 or 3 different wrong pronouns per sentence severely breaking up my reading enjoyment and even confusing me as to who was supposed to be saying what. I like the story though! Keep it up!
I read until ch.12 and couldn't continue. The amount of language mistakes makes reading a chore and confusing so I couldn't continue. The story seemed to progress nicely but I got sick of reading
Chapter 10 currently. It seams that the author has rewriten older chapters and latest is done 3 days ago. If it had more chapters and faster publishing I would recomend it fully. As of now I will still say that start of this book is very interesting and as it seems that its not droped you could put it into your libary.The game world here is quit original I hope there will be lot of chapters coming soon.
I see the comments in the first three chapters and I don't know what to say. The readers are complaining about grammar most of the time, they forget to see the story itself, the character is that topical brainless muscle headed, for what I can see. The world is average, so as the story development. There's too many things to improve, but the idea is amazing, and the author must persist if he can improve.
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