Wuying understood what the elder was hinting at at once. "Of course. We shall not speak of this matter until you have made a decision. Indeed, this is but a theory of ours, and we shall need to conduct a few trials first, to see if there is any basis for our future plans. You might wish to check with the others, to see if there are any ... parties willing to take the risk of such experiments, in the near future."
I added this to my library because it didn't say completed. I now have to take it out. You see what you've done! This story was too promising. They say that their conversations went like this. (Not alternative depressing ending the chapter 10 one)Koz: I'm inside you.James: just like before.Neighbors: Get a room!Koz and James: "..." We've lived here for a century and you've been next to us. What do you mean get a room.Neighbors: just daily routine. Koz and James: we know.Several rounds later.Koz asks: is it possible that we can get a child?
Still same girl as the one shown in the cartoon, but taller, actually looking her own age instead of 8 or 9. She usually wears a crop top underneath a white tshirt that deoicts a shooting star. Normally has a sweater handy that she wraps around her waist, wears it naturally, or however she feels like wearing it. She typically has on a purple skirt with blakc leggings on underneath, though there are times that she decides against wearing them.
The story is good so far,I hope it's remain same in the future, The Interaction between MC and FL is good.The writing quality is very good.Keep up the good work 👍
I’ve been absolutely hooked on this novel! Your world-building and character development are phenomenal, and as a fellow writer I must say I really love your writing style.I recently started my own sci-fi novel, The Strongest Interstellar Soldier System, and it’s been an exciting journey so far. It’s about a young man, Caden Arden, who inherits a mysterious system from his father, a former traitor to humanity, and embarks on a mission to prove himself while navigating a high-tech, interstellar world. I’d love for you (and any fellow readers here!) to check it out and share your thoughts. Your support would mean the world to me as I grow as a writer. Keep up the fantastic work, and I hope we can support each other in this incredible journey!
Very fun read could do with some more substance, sometimes the story fast tracks events like his business which I thick could have more detail,Good stuff Keep it going! 🙏🙏🙏
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