Its sad the writer did the epologue in a rush...Can there be stories of them later in years?? Would love to read about Lorenzo searching for them and Fio and her son's life... But thank you for this amazing story
I only read a few chapters but I couldn't continue. I understand that English may not be the authors first language but I shouldn't have to work to read the book. There were too many times where the writing went from a characters POV to the authors POV mid sentence. Too many mix ups w/she he him her
The story itself is very interesting, but the grammar makes it hard to follow. As it constantly changes between he/she and his/hers when in one of the characters pov.
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