When he entered the vehicle he tried to look for his friend but when he saw that his seat was already taken he just looked at Jungkook with questioning eyes. "Why is he sitting in my place?" He asked, pointing to Jimin, who seemed to be sleeping.
The two of them, both Jack and King, stared at the figure in silver armor, a picture of a golden lion on the top left of the breastplate. Standing in front of them was Gladisor Adriach Tatsumi.
The familiar girl voice comes from the crowds when that Hyu guy comes out with the knights still wearing his winter gear holding his harpoon gun. He looks at me and readies his gun saying:
This is pretty good, nothing crazy and you can tell some of dialogue is inspired by anime or something but it's not to the point where it's annoying to read. A lot of common tropes but they're done reasonably well.
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