In the Spotlight

I think the writing is a bit too formal and hard to read... am I the only one feeling this... or am I simply inexperienced

it's decent I guess. I haven't read far yet but it seems ok. the characters personality and choices seems to contradict sometimes...or maybe that's my personality conflicting with the character?... Also I have kind of a hard time reading this through. the translation is ok but its hard to figure out who's talking, if the character is just thinking,or if the MC is even the current point of view cause it does switch around sometimes

Good good good