In Another World With My House

It is one of the best i read abt being overpowered and really it was really good just waiting when u gonna update more chapters

I’d give an honest review. I really enjoy this book. It has a nice concept, good world building and the main character is well thought out. Most other characters don’t have much depth to them but it’s understandable, it’s a game with many players. I would say that I didn’t like the story development that much. It’s the classic “new power up, stronger adversaries”. How can he clash with an ancient dragon here but is scared of a baby one there. He would fight toe to toe with the strongest people in one place but go somewhere else that should on the same level but meet much stronger opponents. I know it’s for the story but I don’t like it. He can’t be losing every other mental battle, how would any other person survive on the continent if that was the case.I am also frustrated by the horrible editing further into the book, especially in the privileged chapters. These things make or break your book. Do better.I would writing a book soon and I know my review may seem harsh, but take it as constructive criticism. I do like your book hence my incessant support.

The summary would make you believe the MC was somehow abused or mistreated. I've read the prologue (which is frustratingly long and lasts 5 chapters) and nothing of sorts is happening. In fact, everyone is super-nice to him and he is the one who acts weird and extremely paranoid.To main character, Kai, is some introverted kid with inferiority complex so deep, he flinches even when people give him compliments. He can't talk to his mother, he can't talk to his landlady and he can barely communicate with his new friends. If (on of his friends) wasn't so social and kept inviting him in, he'd probably never had any friends at all.All along the story (as far as I read) he is complaining on an on in his head, feeling miserable for no reason, even when his friends offer him amazing adventure, he somehow twists it in his head to feel like a victim of kidnapping. Its like if you constantly hear ominous music playing in the background of his life... Really, if something bad happens to him in the story, I would feel satisfaction. He probably deserves it at some point.

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Rika this is amazing continue with the good work! I like it and I also voted for you! I don’t even know why I’m using grammar tbh lol but honestly it’s good.

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Now civilization has once again taken a stand with its citizens, only the children of the previous generation's nobility, scientists, and all other higher class people you could think of but now all back to the normal system of humanity, starting from the bottom, those who fell from their position during the reformation period (poor) up to the new leaders of each country (rich).

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