it's a good story with minor flaws, that being as the story progresses the MC's magic doesn't last as long as in previous battles but ends up being a plus because he's not so overpowered and makes the story boring.
OOk. I love this story. yeah it does some things bad, but I love it. I think its fun and clever at times. other tmes its silly and goofy making me laugh over all I recommend it if you're just bored or something. its great.
My own view (no offence) | Boring story.....Too repetitive..... everything forced on mc. character design meh.....well only thing good is update stability
20 chapters and I'm already immersed in the story and very good translation, I didn't see any error so far. The chapters are also longer compared to other novels. So please get chosen asap cause I never put this much effort in promoting a novel ever since, Divine Card Creator before. tldr; novel good, please read it :)
Has potential, more character depth is really all that I could ask for from a novel like this. The world building is acceptable for this novel, but it it isn't great. Keep up the good work man.
Interesting novel but has some problems. Writing is very bad, full of mistakes, which makes it very hard to read and understand. besides there are many parts that have not been explained but things just happen.
This story is amazing! It has an engaging fictional universe, relatable yet deep characters, and lots of both action and comedy. I eagerly await the next chapter’s release every day. Great job author!
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