I found this book randomly on the trial reads. it is so good. I barely read much into it and was all ready hooked. i ended up staying up late reading and falling asleep with my cell phone from reading it. I honestly hope that they accept this book fully. I absolutely love it and wanting to know what all happens.
I gotta say, the synopsis really tells a lot about the story. It really makes me want to start reading right away! 10/10 great synopsis! Don’t change it, please.
It's a pretty good novel. The cheat is interesting and the MC is fairly likable. The worldbuilding is well.... lets just say the Author is a big fan of the Souls series.To the point I've read the MC enters a dungeon called "Hive-like" (aka Souls-like"), where there are invaders etc. like the covenants in Souls. There are also familiar bosses, mostly from Dark souls 1 and 2. The love interest has a skill that summons bosses from Elden Ring, and the main "bad guys" as of now are the Healing Church worshipping the Moon Presence from Yharnam (from Bloodborne). This all would have been great to read, but unfortunately the translation quality drastically goes down after the first 50 chapters, and continues to deteriorate.
This novel is yet again another example of a novel with a story which could be developed and made into something interesting maybe even "slightly" different from the rest, however the cliche and culture that runs in these types of novels has ruined it. Our MC has spent 6 years IRL which is 12 years in game yet proceeds to get surprised by a level 5 enemy using a basic skill... He claims he killed an ancient dragon yet he can't kill a level 5 enemy with 0 brain cells. Continuing onward this novels MC has to be one of the most retarded ones ever, we all know that in most novels where MC has reincarnated or transmigrated with experience and future knowledge that they end up being dense but this novel takes it to a whole new level. 80% of the novel is the MC just repeating things such as "6 years of experience" or how the MC's sister will get ill and how nice she is, The author expects us to feel attached or to feel at all for the characters yet shoving this **** in our face is not the way to do it, you have the weave the emotions in not just state how we should feel. The novel's world background is also atrocious, at least in sense to the game as many things which even 10 year old kids would find common sense happened to be things that took people "2 years to realize and caused a big commotion"... that's basically saying that although we are nearly 100 years into the future with all this advanced technology (of which the understanding of should indicate the human race becoming more intelligent) that people can't think that maybe just maybe you can also be the evil guy in a quest like wtf. Also i understand that in novels somethings have to made so that the MC coincidentally finds this or in this case that he just happens to be lucky in his drops, however that needs to be in a more subtle way and in which the MC still faces challenges, i mean the predictability of this novel is just absurd an example is when he gets a belt with +15 HP and just so happens to need it to survive against the next guard he attacks or how after gaining the full set (which was also coincidentally gained after remembering some fucking genius gurus advice that there's two sides to every story and that you can be the evil guy) he has enough reputation to make the priest turn his back... The rest of the novel is just people exclaiming how MC must be some Rich 1st tester and how they are mysterious and shouldn't be offended (typical CN bull****) and "subtle" face-slapping. Overall the MC of this novel doesn't even begin to act like a veteran who was once one of the top 10 swordsmen should act, the flow of the story is just is stupid it's almost as if somebody was just thinking and writing no planning before hand and no editing as none of the names which should be capitalized are capitalized, about 50+ chapters are just wasted in the game and the real life world is only touched at the end with more BS in your face telling you how you should feel, after about 35 chapters i skim read most of it considering how everything was jut a useless info dump and repetition. I cannot begin to comprehend how people are rating novels like these with 5 stars and how always these kind of novels get selected through trial read and novels which are actually good and have a fresh perspective in webnovel like "Plague Doctor" actually get dropped.
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Upon reading the early chapters I realized that this book is a gem. The story has a great start. The plot is very interesting. And the writing style of the author is amazing. I couldn't find any flaws. Keep it up author. You are really doing great.
Hey guys, this is the author, masterless sword(无主之剑). This is my webnovel id (yep, as a reader account instead of offical account, I duno why Qidian keep me from contacting the translator group for years so that I have to create an reader account on my own -- and pay the soulstone to read my own work in English on the app, just like everybody else).Just to let you know that I havent and will never drop my work on Kingdom's Bloodline, the story of Thales will continue til his end (or mine), at least in Chinese.Btw, I was never informed about the terminating of translation (its ok, the Qidian or Webnovel never told me anything about the online-selling situation oversea anyway, even when the translation started years ago).But pls feel free to contact me on my Weibo (weibo.com/u/6171559470) if u have any further questions, or you can just email me to 1615111844@qq.com.And yep, I can speak English.
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