Full of Taoist Style. This is a good story with philosophy of life. It's show the different attitude and belief through the characters. Personally, I like this style of story. But some reader which taste prefer Fantasy-action-advanture may not like it. Cause, the story rhythm are slowly flow no hast nor delay like water.
Five stars in every category because I strive for that level of authorship. The Dao of Storytelling is my goal. I plan to update at least one chapter a day. I plan to upload more on my days off of work, but I want quality of quantity. The length of my chapters varies, but I will not post anything under 2,000 words.There are very few grammatical errors and hopefully no misspellings. Paragraph comments with corrections are welcome. The development isn't the typical fast cultivation road. I plan to write more detail and hopefully bring my characters to life in the story. First, though, there is an R-18 and Polgamy tag. Those are just elements that make up the whole story. Not a harem seeker or a sex-addicted MC. No underage chicks and no legal lolis.The world background will become more expansive as the story evolves. Don't expect many info dumps as I like to tell the story instead of blatantly revealing the goal. I.e., "This is a kingdom-building journey" vs. " To return to the height of our ancestors, we will need an army."As for my MC, he has no cheats. He's born as a young master of a fallen clan. Yet, he maintains his maturity and the woes of his past life. He never wanted to reincarnate but comes to value his life and fights to succeed in his current life where he failed in the past.Well, that's it for now.
Very unique and fun to read.The system isnt developed as major plot point but as a comical tool that while helps to drive the plot forward (mainly through increasing mc's cultivation) isnt the mc's sole motivation to do the things he/she/??? does. The fact that techniques and itens bought dont have lengthy technical descriptions, without meridians, affinities, cores, dantians, elements, etc etc. help prove the idea that cultivation itself isnt the focus of the novel.So far, it has been a bit ~(more than "a bit")~ rushed but that didnt make it any less enjoyable.~~Read up to chapter 8 out of 8, 28 of April/2020
Very interesting character being quite himself. Wonderful story. I like the way MC adopts his transmigration from 27 years to 13 years boy. Does he becomes the owner of the silver ring?What power is hidden in it? ... it's making me curious. Great work!!
What I love about this story is that it moves forward at a nice pace and not sluggishly, which really grips my interest. I love the characters, both the boys are so relatable and funny. Keep it up!
"You got what?" They both asked at the same time. Con smiled smugly and put crossed his arms to add a dramatic pause before his answer. Both June and Don got annoyed when they saw Con do this. Don slowly drew his sword while June got her bow and aimed it at Con. Con immediately stopped posing and raised his hands up in surrender.
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