I shall seek revenge

I decided to write my first review what had all what I think about this novel.- First of all.... ITS TOOOO SLOW PACED, reminds me about cultivation chat group where basically evry fkng day was mentioned. - Second of all is that MC loves to do some kind of useless ****. Like well... Talk with trash wich takes him like 10 chapters or more. Or do something really stupid and inconsistent. - Third is again. MAGIC. How the hell pple lvl up in there? MC basically SOLO cleans whole dungeon and gets most XP posible BUT THERE ARE PLAYERS WITH LVLS HIGHER THAT HIS?! Like wtf? - Forth is what I mentioned above and more is INFO DUMPS, just one over another. Srsly! I can basically skip entire chapters cause well... Battle wich is not even interesting. - Fifth is magic PVP masters. Game is basically VRMMO so you have to have ability to move in one way or another. Why the hell there are so much combat masters? Like srsly one over another. With their magic lvl ups.- Sixth is just story is getting boring. Like wtf? He does one thing like for 4 chapters with tons of tons of info. Also the SHOW BUT NOT TELL makes me rage. He says WOW SO NICE ITEM.... to get in description in like tons of chapters. - Seventh is that the writes said us that MC is basically 1000y.o cultivator so he has to be like so fkng OP beating evryone easily. But he has to tryhard as it looks like. - Eight is that how the game works.... Giving and boss with like milion HP? For what goddamn reason? Just to waste another 5 chapters with infodumps all over the places. - Ninth is that MC loves to waste time on useless ****. He can take a ploblem just for no reason for himself and later give excuse "I wanted to see how to pvp ingame". He just makes stuff difficult for himself for no apparent reason. Sometimes he looks like clever guy.... But a lot of times he does inconsistent ****.- Tenth is that Enemies that MC meets are over his lvl alwase and the most hatefull are crits. Like why dont you makes One shot abilities? No lets drag the battle for hrs. Why class asassin even exists? Also some class has just insane lvl of difficulty. Like combat master, where somehow you have to make your own skills wich MAGICALLY game can interpret. I'LL. MIGHT ADD MORE LATER. THE PROGRAM IS LAGGING. NICE OPTIMIZATION LOL.

This story even with 20 chapters has promises to engage mY attention. I would like to know more about the protagonist but twenty chapters are not enough.

Great at least for now. The writing could improve, but it's not too bad. The big problems come from the way the author handles the speech and the quotations marks that go with it. In terms of character design and world background, these are temporary scores which are bound to change later.

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Honestly would have loved it but I’m a 100% sure that the author is not Nigerian because they’re a lot of mispronunciations in the book and a lot of names are totally not aligning with the characters 🤷u200d♂️🤷u200d♂️But other than that which is totally my viewpoint since I’m Nigerian and igbo too specifically from Abia like the MC of the book.......  The book is otherwise wonderful

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An easy to read novel with good narration and good plot, the sentence structure is on par with most of the good novels here, I hope you keep writing author this is great!

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