A singular sphere rattles its way down the dark hallway, coming to a stop just within the visible range. Before stopping and immediately releasing a smoke screen. Aqualad whips out his Water-bears quickly, forming solid swords in seconds. Roquette stands up beside him when nothing happens for a few seconds.
i like the idea of this one but i feel as if some is missing but I'll do this sandwich style. this does drama really well. my favorite moment is our mc facing her father and his new family and even the ML's drama with both her family and his own. however it doesn't feel like the Mc story, in fact how she and the Male Lead met doesn't make sense Sense she broke and he's a rich person with no backstory other than " i know that he hates my dad and he agreed to married me and cares for me despite not knowing anything."if it was the male lead who approached her after finding out who she was it would be more logical sense a. he is wealthy thus being able to approach and make it set her into the current position in the story, be attentive towards mc make him express his to this point naturally. but besides the mc plan and ML's feeling towards her feeling unwarranted, the story and characterss are very well written and i would have loved to seen the story from the male lead perspective to see what allowed the mc to approach and convincr him to this plan. i left off on chapter 10 but i look forward to seeing if things make more sense later on or not, but as always good job author
well, I started it randomly but it was quite goodthough world background may seem somewhat lackingthe ability of mc is new and refreshingits definitely worth a read
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