not good, contradicts alot of things through out story, no depth in romance or kingdom building or well story plot in general, need proof reading i mean like "she was mad and couldnt continue eating so she stopped talking and continued eating" and this type of writing continues to happen alot throughout the story
Some parts were okay but then it just keeps dipping back into cliched garbage. Don't waste your time. This novel is absolutely abysmal. The current story at 43 is so cliched I AM COUGHING UP BLOOD!! So lame.
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Gotta rate, The story is good and been reading all the chapters for a single day, when’s the next update though.............................................................
<p>While sleeping I did not notice that my mother came and slept beside me, that's how weak I was after the evolution. Now then, after I woke up I was feeling hungry and maybe thanks to primal instincts I just turned my head and began feasting on my mother. *cough* now that just sounds wrong, just think of it as my mother giving me food, yeah just think that. Then I realized it, my mother was sleeping with me! She was probably really worried about me and followed me since I left the room.</p>
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